The Relay (Web Version)

By: steponefilmsSubscribe Channel: Contests Location: Cedar Rapids, IA Tuesday, Jun 30 , 09 at 12:29 PM

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This is our submission for the 15 second CSB commercial contest. Join our team as we race for the finish line in a relay with a twist. Enjoy!

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Anonymous says ... on Wednesday, Jul 1 at 7:19 AM

Very nice!

Mark B. says ... on Wednesday, Jul 1 at 7:55 AM

This is the bomb!

ADuncan says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 12:41 AM

A penny, to a quarter, to a dollar - and all by working together? Love it!

Carol A. says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 7:03 AM

Very creative! It communicates teamwork effectively. Nice filming. Very positive. Shows growth of your money if you bank with CSB. I like it!

Lisa says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 8:28 AM

great idea! i love the shot at the end - hard work and managing finances pays off!

BWatkins says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 8:43 AM

This should go straight on TV just as it is. Very nice!

Kent G. says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 9:06 AM

Awesome! A creative idea very well implemented. Nice job!

Anonymous says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 12:17 PM

awesome video, first prize material :-)

Pat L says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 1:37 PM

Nice job! Looks like you had a great time making it, too!

Anonymous says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 1:41 PM

This is definitely my favorite. You got my vote.

Anonymous says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 2:18 PM

Very creative! Very professional looking as well! The whole idea of the penny to a dollar was great. Perfect commercial for CSB!

The Dude says ... on Thursday, Jul 2 at 6:41 PM

Great job! looks good.

RenaC. says ... on Friday, Jul 3 at 10:07 AM

I love the concept of community running together in a race. Excellent quality, too! You definitely have my vote.

Glenn says ... on Friday, Jul 3 at 12:34 PM

It packs a punch in a short segment. Well done

Bill says ... on Friday, Jul 3 at 3:01 PM

Nice concept. Well done!

JL says ... on Friday, Jul 3 at 11:48 PM

Excellent. You definitely have my vote

Anonymous says ... on Sunday, Jul 5 at 10:23 AM

Great work. I love it.

Kelly M. says ... on Wednesday, Jul 8 at 1:11 PM

I definitely like yours the best, and I'm not just saying that because you're my friend! :)

Wayne P. says ... on Thursday, Jul 9 at 8:47 AM

Very well done! It does everything an ad should do in 15 seconds.

Christine says ... on Friday, Jul 10 at 1:44 AM

The film quality looks very nice, even though it's just on the web. Good actor choices and voiceover. professional feel.

Renee says ... on Wednesday, Jul 15 at 11:22 PM

Clever idea and well put together!

Renee says ... on Wednesday, Jul 15 at 11:22 PM

Clever idea and well put together!

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